Indeed, good points. But 1) capitalism has already morphed into a new version of feudalism, and 2) the end of your essay, the where do we go from here part, is where the discussion should start. Capitalism has been criticized since its very beginning, a few hundred years ago, with very little result. As one scholar recently observed "it is easier to imagine the end of the world than the end of Capitalism". WE NEED TO ARTICULATE, not only what an alternative look likes, but what is actually achievable (Including what institutional barriers need to change first). Note: https://medium.com/@daneke/slouching-toward-untopia-bf0a92f9d595